1. Getting my car: the day I got my care and getting to drive it home
- I had waited almost a year for it
- I put in 1,000 dollars of my own money for it
- I did the research on buying it & presented it to my dad
- I was not expecting to actually get it that day
2. September 11: the day America was attacked my terrorists, killing hundreds of people
- how I found out during school
- how scared I was
- how confused I was
- how it affected America
3. My Uncle Tony died: the day that he died & when my family and I found out
- my family and I were on vacation checking in to the hotel when my dad found out
- watching my parents, sister and brother cry
- feeling very confused
- feeling terrible for my dad
- having to drive all the way home after being so excited to be on vacation and just getting there
- looking back on it now, and understanding the situation more
I think you should go with your third option because it relates to you the most, and I think it had a bigger impact in your life than your other options.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Pablo. However, i think you would be able to enjoy writing about your new car more because it is a more joyous occation.
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