*Start by explaining the vacation
1. My family and I on the way to Disney's Vero Beach Hotel (explain each member of the family, who they are, how old, etc.)
2. The excitement and anxiousness we were all feeling about finally getting there
3. Finally arriving at the hotel & in awe about how beautiful the hotel was
4. The family split up: my mom, my brother & I went to the hotel bathroom, while my dad & my sister checked in
5. My sister came to us with the bad news that my Uncle Tony has died. My dad got the call while checking in.
What I am trying to accomplish with this introduction is a sort of happy mood that everyone can relate to which is going on vacation with your family to a new place. I want to show what a dramatic change in mood it was for my family & I when we got the news, going from excitement & happiness to extremely saddened & shocked.
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